very very rough draft - type specimen

With that in mind, this is my attempt at suspending judgment and allowing myself to just get something on the page that I can work over and obsess about later (rather than crippling myself with self-doubt and white space).
This is also my first experience working with type in this way so any constructive feedback/pushes in the right direction would be much appreciated!
Let's see if I can figure out how to upload...
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oof. i am really not happy with this one.

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would probably be better if i used more text?

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just threw the 'you's together randomly around the page so haven't even begun to adjust. overall i actually like the way they came together though i know there might be a lot wrong with it.

Still working on setting the last few pages in inDesign...