better? at all? page breaks between the "O" and "R" in the second "words" which is why there's the weird space.
too much as-is, i think but i'm wondering if i should work with this idea over the first one. what do you think? spreading into the first page or keeping separate? what i like about this is that it reflects the content better - this reaching between lonelydude's words and the suffering world of his long lost. but it's overdone right now.
above takes away some of the stuff and below changes the position of "then listen"
would love any feedback, thanks!
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