this is the older version of spread 3:
new version. tightened up the type on the left and tried to fix the space under "suffering." tried switching the glyphs on the two "f"s but i think i like the first way better...more tortured, like wringing hands...also tried spacing out the mrs eaves smallcaps at the bottom. what do you think? would love to hear your feedback.
older version of spread 4:
version 2:
eliminating all the bold:
next is that big "you" page that folds out. will post trials of that in the next post. here's spread 6. i wanted it to be really minimal and quiet, to follow the big, strong YOU. but too minimal?
haven't spent much time on this spread. going to have to do a lot of trials i think. is any of it working so far?
in the specimen i showed in class, i had printed out the "remembered" on the facing page and cut it out to paste over the text type. it created a window which i ended up really liking so i'm going to keep the hole in the final.
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